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"HEHEHEHEHEHH, I KNOW HE DOESN'T FEEL THE SAME." A voice echos from a small house. Or at least, it LOOKS like a house, its hard to tell, its pretty much destroyed, surprising its still standing. "I KNOW, I KNOW HE DOESN'T FEEL THE SAME! OHOHOHOHOOHOHOHO! BUT THAT'S OK~! I SUPPOSE, CAUSE ONE DAY HE WILL SEE, ONE DAY, HE WILL SEE, THAT I LOVE HIM! OHOHOHHOHOOHHOOH!!" This voice, its sounds miserable, yet... it keeps laughing, at absolutely nothing!

"OHOHOHOHOHOHOOHOHOHO! HOW WONDERFUL IT WILL BE, FOR HIM TO FINALLY SEE, THAT HE LOVES ME!" Funny, that rhymed, but that's not important, whats wrong with this person? "I WILL JUST SAY THAT I LOVE HIM TO MYSELF! I COULD NEVER SAY IT TO HIM! OHOHOHOOHOHOO! WHY AM I SO PATHETIC...." His tone drops lower, it makes you worry. "I CANT DO ANYTHING RIGHT" He sounds angry. "WHY CANT I DO ANYTHING RIGHT, WHY DO I HAVE TO BE SO PATHETIC?!?!?!?!?!?" A loud crash is heard coming from inside the house. Damn! What is this guys deal!?

"OHHOHOHOHOHO!!! OHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOOH!!!" All you can hear now is his laughter and loud crashing. The whole house shakes and shutters, it looks like it could crumble at any given moment. You get worried for the mans safety, and without thinking, you rush over to the "house" and barge through the door as if it was your own home. The whole house goes silent. As if nobody was in there. You see a man in the far back. He has his back to you, and he seems to be looking down. You shutter, and start to regret going inside the house. The man looks up, but he keeps his back turned to you. You begin to tremble, what is he going to do to you. Suddenly the door behind you shut quickly. You flinch and make a strange squeaking noise. Your trapped.

The man begins to chuckle lightly. Your shaking and backed against the door. Wiggling the doorknob to try and get the door open, its no use, its shut to tightly, WHAT CLOSED THIS DOOR!? The man twists his head to the side, you can only see half of his face, and a wicked smile spread across it. One sharp tooth sticking out of the corner of his mouth. You freeze, to scared to move or jiggle the door nob. He turns completely around to see you. He glares, his smile fades. You begin to tremble more violently, what is he going to do to you!? He chuckles, but creepier, creepier then ever before. You flinch and begin to jiggle the doorknob again. It still wont open!!

Suddenly, the man makes a quick dash over to you, he stands before you, much taller then you thought he was. He places a hand over yours, the hand that's on the doorknob. You begin to cry. His smile returns, wider then ever. He lifts your hand off of the doorknob and places it by your side. He grabs the doorknob and lifts it some, you look quickly to the side to see what hes doing. He turns it quickly and it opens. "SOMETIMES... THE DOOR GETS STUCK" He says to you. He moves you aside and opens the door all the way. He glares at you, and his smile fades once more. "GET... OUT..." He says to you. You dash out of the house as fast as you can, not daring to look back, crying, running and stumbling your way home.

But before you can get far away enough, you hear him say something.

"NEVER INTERRUPT A MADMAN AND HIS DEPRESSING THOUGHTS OF LOVE... OHOHOHOHOOHOHOH!!!"
:iconask-frost-prince:
((wow, i wrote this because of this song: [link] ))

((i was creeped out just writing this .-.))

((by the way, mad man is Rico, duh X'D))

((i absolutely love this though, damn, i cant stop reading it))

((i will NEVER say who he loves))

((NEVER....EVER.....))

((EEVVVEEERRR))
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:iconask-rae-the-rabbit:
(( gurrl your a really good writer. I think i know who Rico likes tuhuhu ))
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:iconask-frost-prince:
((thankies .u. and you think you do =U= ))
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:iconask-rae-the-rabbit:
(( yussssh is iiit...FP oWo ))
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:iconask-frost-prince:
((hehehe ^^ and maybe~ you have to wait and see~~~))
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:icon62nh:
I like this. I listened to the song, didn't get the connection to the story, or nor have I any idea who Rico is (not in the story but in real life) and furthermore I loved the song.
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:iconask-frost-prince:
((thankies .u. and that's good))
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:iconblastoking4:
~Blastoking4 Sep 16, 2012   Digital Artist
Whooooooaaaa thiiisss iiiiss aawweeesssoooooommmeeeee ^^
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:iconask-frost-prince:
((i get a gold star for trying X'D anyways, thankies X'DD hehe))
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:iconblastoking4:
~Blastoking4 Sep 17, 2012   Digital Artist
((it's amazing ^^))
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:iconask-frost-prince:
((aw, thankies >u<))
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